tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6487370731519354458.post8211897410472708336..comments2024-03-26T07:17:02.237+00:00Comments on Jan Poo's Lab: Chapter 1 (a)Jan Poohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12161367559594321749noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6487370731519354458.post-68748656888229263592013-11-26T09:23:49.925+00:002013-11-26T09:23:49.925+00:00At last, Erika shows up. Would have been nice to m...At last, Erika shows up. Would have been nice to mention it was a Haruhi parody at the start. Honestly, it would have been easier on me if the names had been more obvious about their connections. Even after finishing the prologue, I know I'm still going to have trouble sorting the characters.<br /><br />Good start. I liked the Kyon monologue and Erika seems to be keeping her charm. Erica and Knox definitely were my favorite characters in the story. Having someone giving some actual organization to that mess of a plot so that it could actually become solvable and wasn't being distracted by wanting to help out Beatrice was a massive relief. Plus, I had never heard of Knox's Rules before. <br /><br />Erika, you may have been the villain but you will always be the protagonist of my heart. The only one that was willing to go to the mat to SOLVE THE MYSTERIES! for that alone, I will forgive the attempted rape of Battler and other crimes you committed. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6487370731519354458.post-34358080476558477712013-10-09T11:35:43.976+01:002013-10-09T11:35:43.976+01:00Hmm. Is there a trick to writing in Erika's pe...Hmm. Is there a trick to writing in Erika's perspective? It's rather tricky for me .__.'Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6487370731519354458.post-2087190198883194712012-10-08T21:23:03.672+01:002012-10-08T21:23:03.672+01:00I loved Witches&Woodlands so I'm really lo...I loved Witches&Woodlands so I'm really looking forward to reading your new work!<br /><br />PS: I catched a typo in the first paragraph: "I'm no not even tired"Deayohnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6487370731519354458.post-80796811131018411682012-09-06T00:48:36.949+01:002012-09-06T00:48:36.949+01:00you misspelt 'full bloom' as 'fool blo...you misspelt 'full bloom' as 'fool bloom'... but this is really good so far o:renahhhttp://suteki-renahh-desu.tumblr.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6487370731519354458.post-15378175893848757172012-07-18T18:47:51.936+01:002012-07-18T18:47:51.936+01:00damn....i havent finished you other proyect and yo...damn....i havent finished you other proyect and you already begun a new one... shame on me...itachi17509https://www.blogger.com/profile/14961564235957883184noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6487370731519354458.post-83837396893429565582012-06-25T03:53:00.988+01:002012-06-25T03:53:00.988+01:00Erika and Dlanor ain't gonna pair up, are they...Erika and Dlanor ain't gonna pair up, are they? :/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6487370731519354458.post-70103042067721566642012-06-18T23:23:03.334+01:002012-06-18T23:23:03.334+01:00Interesting, I wonder where exactly this is? Is Er...Interesting, I wonder where exactly this is? Is Erika in a new game, is this a different world or is this a game Erika created after EP6 went differently?<br /><br />But more importantly, is that this looks very good and that I look forward to reading more of this.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com