tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6487370731519354458.post7500689562468015492..comments2024-03-26T07:17:02.237+00:00Comments on Jan Poo's Lab: Chapter 1 (c)Jan Poohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12161367559594321749noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6487370731519354458.post-67061050463657918292012-10-08T23:22:20.042+01:002012-10-08T23:22:20.042+01:00Some typos:
"it seems they feel from a nearby...Some typos:<br />"it seems they feel from a nearby shelf" --> fell<br />"the middle of the triangle were conjured demons are supposed to appear" --> where<br />"I'm not sure what material is made of," --> it is<br /><br />btw I'm not trying to be annoying or critizing, I'm just trying to help a bit by proofreading the first draftDeayohnoreply@blogger.com